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what makes you more than an animal the ticking clock, the thunderstorm i only write when the blind man's cane reverberates over the stones why do you love when no one is near the empty mirror, the...

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Excellent Mark. You speak of the very essence of the writer. "I only write" Only you can say it so well. Dee

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The reader gets a feel of all the different things and situations that trigger a writer's thinking, questioning, observing all the details/small in life that are a metaphor for the bigger questions....

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An interesting take on a writer's well quite often so deep that the author knows & understands the depth - just how deep it goes.Jan

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Mark,I hear so clearly the sounds you write... They contrast and highlight each otherand each sets its own tone...The ticking of the clock ( thundering when one is waiting)  The storm, thundering,the...

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Great poem, Mark. Powerful imagery. I love the rhythm and the repetition. Watch out for that black fog. Don't let him get a hold of you.

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I am minded that Sarah has captured the essence of this poem so well, that I will add just one word, well, two actually... Brilliant writing!

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You explain it so well Mark. We find reaons not to write very often - everything has to be just right. For me it's silence. Any kind of noise and I won't even try:)

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Hi Mark This is an outstanding poem and one that deserves several readings to encompass its impact. I love the interpretaiton Sarah gave and can relate to much of what she has brilliantly expressed!...

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Dee, Jan, Blue, Jean, Kerri, Bongler, Thanks for your time. Sarah, Wendy, Let me know when either of you are to judge a poetry contest. No . . . that sounds criminal. Thanks for the elucidation. MSS

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a haunting and thoughtful write Mark made me think of an old Daphne du Maurier novel I read once about time travel in Cornwall

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very cool... susan

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Mark, Back for another read! Dee

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Willow, Susan, Dee Thanks! MSS

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